Share your work.

[Motegi]

I figured I would start a thread to share some of my writings with everyone. feel free to add yours in.

here goes nothing


I just wanted to say I love you, I dont say it enough. I want you to know I will be there if live gets too tough. I want to hold you close, fall asleep to the rythmn of your heart. I want you to know Im never far away, when we are apart. You are the light to my soul, my saving grace. I will forever keep the memory of you in a safe place. Next to my heart, always on my mind. In a place only I can find. Now the only time I see you is at night when I sleep. When I wake I close my eyes just so I can keep. The memory of you alive. Without your touch, your scent, your presence how will I survive? The world is so dark now that I cannot see your smile. I dont have the strength to go on, so I'll sit in the dark for a while. And maybe reminise about the times together we shared. This is the first time in my life I have ever been scared. When you go a part of me will leave too. I wish I could find the words to describe how I truly feel about you. The only way to show you is over time. But it seems my loving you is a crime. Now you are out of my reach, there is nothing I can do. All I wanted was to make sure no harm came to you. I just wanted to be there to take away all your pain. Wanted to lie in bed with you and listen to the rain. Resting my head on your shoulder, holding you tight. I am not ready to give up this fight. I want you to take me in your arms and say it will be okay. But I have no one to embrace, so instead I pray. Silently I thank God when I hear your voice and see you smile. I pray for strength to get me through this trial. But mostly I pray for you and not for me. I pray that one day you will be free. To laugh, smile and be with whomever you decide. If life gets slippery I want to catch you when you slide. I would give up the world to touch you have another night with you asleep in my bed. Its saying good-bye and letting go I dread. It breaks my heart to think that this is good-bye. There is little more I can do now but cry. Whats meant to be will happen so despite the pain I must let go. Keep my feelings inside so only I know. How everytime I see you I feel so complete. How much my love grows with your every heartbeat. I will love you until the end of my days. And when you go a part of you will stay. Forever you will live on in my heart, your cherished memory entwined in my soul. There it will remain as I grow old. But I just wanted to say I love you, I dont say it nearly enough. And know that my heart is open to you, if ever life gets too rough.

["mazdachic"]

I'm gonna cry you write good Motegi!

[mixmaster_matt]

that is deep Jo. If I had the talent I would start writing but your stuff is really good.

["mazdachic"]

that is deep Jo. If I had the talent I would start writing but your stuff is really good.

That's what I'm saying she is really talented in that area...Jo you could right stuff and become famous...I'd buy it and I'm sure the rest of us would as well!

[ZoomZoomH]

i used to have some resemblence of artistic talent, but now it's all but disappeared

[skr33t_rac3r]

i used to frrestyle its kinda like the stuff u wrote i was even on a couple cds but i havent done it in like a couple years.

[Marc93lx]

That's very impressive. Hits kinda close to home.

[goldstar]

There was a young lady from Kent
And off to the Falls she went
But sorry to say
It was protege day
And all out of shape she was bent

A Protege driver McGlinn
Had emissions watery and thin
When they gave him Viagra
He came like Niagara
Much to his girlfriends chagrin

A Protege driver named Brock
Once said 7 seconds he'd clock
So his engine he goosed
With much too much boost
And drove a rod through his block

A Protege driver, no wimp
Said I want my car to be pimp
A fart can is cool
And stickers will rule
And now they think he's a simp

A Protege driver named Rae
Would post on the Forum all day
I must post one more
Don't call me a whore
Just cause I've nothing to say

And one I didn't write just because I like it:

There once was a plumber named Lee
Who was plumbing his girl by the sea
She said, Lee stop your plumbing
I hear someone coming
The only one cumming is me, said Lee

[KiddX]

that is some very good writing. im throwing around the isea of taking journalism as my major. sometimes when im alone ill just get the urge to write something, whatever im feeling at the time, whatever is on my mind, a discription of something ive been pondering, just anything really. ive always been good with words, but my writing is so illegible that none of my teachers ever read anything i wrote, they just gave it a C and went to the next kid. there is a certin enjoyment that i get when i write, im assuming its the same for you, no? its refreshing to see a beautiful woman with a mind to match.

[Marc93lx]

that is some very good writing. im throwing around the isea of taking journalism as my major. sometimes when im alone ill just get the urge to write something, whatever im feeling at the time, whatever is on my mind, a discription of something ive been pondering, just anything really. ive always been good with words, but my writing is so illegible that none of my teachers ever read anything i wrote, they just gave it a C and went to the next kid. there is a certin enjoyment that i get when i write, im assuming its the same for you, no? its refreshing to see a beautiful woman with a mind to match.

Im the same way dude, sometimes I just feel like writing. I have always enjoyed it. Never peotry like this though, I was never good at poetry. I used to write short stories when I was younger, and just recently I started writing again. Nothing like what Motegi wrote tho. Along the same theme but not poetic, more story or letter form. (like from the standpoint of me writing to the girl or writing about her) Heartbreak will do that to you.

[KiddX]

hey goldstar! i got my verse for you

There was a driver named Kyle
his white protege was a pile
he sat on his trunk
and his suspension shrunk
dont tell him he's fat
he's in denial

[Marc93lx]

Here are a few lines of text I have written:

If you wait your whole life to fall in love, then end up being hurt by the one you waited for so long to love, how are you supposed to love again when your heart has been shattered into a million pieces?


It takes a bigger man to cry and then admit he did than it does to not cry at all.


I finally realized it wasn't you I hated, it was me. I hated myself for losing you. I still hate myself for that.


I wrote the following just last nite after seeing my ex for the first time in a month...

I saw that look on your face today, and with that look came a sigh. It was as if you looked into my eyes and said, "Im sorry, and I miss you." It was a look of regret, a sigh of sadness.

[goldstar]

Re: Share your work

The final limerick I've written that I forgot to include in my original post. This is dedicated to all the fine Texas men and women who are members of this Forum.

There was a young lady from Dallas
Who put some pot in her chalice
And she said with a grin
As her boyfriend drove in
Now watch me turn on his phallus

Any other limerick I happen to post already exists out there in the literature, was NOT written by me and is probably known by most people or certainly ought to be. To close on a properly inspirational note, I often turn to poetry to lift my spirits when I'm feeling down. For example, when you guys are feeling depressed, you can always make yourselves feel better when you realize that things could be worse. Feel lucky that you're not this guy:

There once was a man from Madras
Whose balls were made out of brass
When he struck them together
They played 'Stormy Weather'
And lightning shot out of his ass

Likewise, for the women who are feeling depressed. Knowing that you're not this poor woman will definitely make you aware that others are worse off than you:

There was a young lady from Yap
Who had pimples all over her map
But in her interstices
She had a much worse disease
Commonly known as Clapp

I hope this has been as inspirational and meaningful for you as it has been for me. I appreciate the opportunity to share my work with you all.

02 DX Millenium Red

[Protoss]

A Protege driver named Brock
Once said 7 seconds he'd clock
So his engine he goosed
With much too much boost
And drove a rod through his block

LOL that is awesome that is going in the signature!

[goldstar]

Protoss,

Glad you enjoyed it. Consider it yours.

02 DX Millenium Red